The chart below shows the number of handicapped children registered in special education schools in vietnam from 1995 to 2010.

The chart below shows the number of handicapped children registered in special education schools in vietnam from 1995 to 2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the number of handicapped children registered in special education schools in vietnam from 1995 to 2010.
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the number of handicapped children enrolled in special
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educational institutions in the period of time between 1995 and 2010, in Vietnam. 
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a significant increase in both APC
school
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and North
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,
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West
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were decreased. Looking in more
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, the number of handicapped students
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between 1995 and 2000 decreased by 150,
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in 2010 peaked at well over 600.
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, there was a gradual fall between 1995 and 2000 by around 60.
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just over 250.
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dropped sharply over a period
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of 15
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. In SPED
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, there was a
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out between 1995 and 2000. One notable point is that in 2010, both North
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and SPED
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had
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number of registered students.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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