You would like to reduce your working hours in order to study part time. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter - explain why you want to reduce your working hours - say which hours you would like to work - describe how part-time studies would benifits your employer

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Dear Abdullah, I am writing to reduce my working hours. I have been preparing lately to study master's degree in supply chain,
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it will be hard to balance between working 8 hours a day and studying especially for
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a degree. Studying master's degree
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part-time would be very beneficial to me and will refine my skills leading to
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efficient work performance. I would like to take the night shift for work given that the program has only one time which is from 7AM - 12PM allowing me to work from 3PM - 11PM I hope that you consider my request. Thank you for your support. Regards, Mohammed Sultan

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coherence and cohesion
Consider adding a brief introduction to clarify your request more effectively.
task achievement
Ensure to mention specific skills you expect to gain from your studies to strengthen the connection to your work performance.
suitable writing tone
The letter is polite and maintains a professional tone throughout.
complete response
The explanation for wanting to reduce working hours is clearly stated and relevant.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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