The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the proportions of 4 countries’ Australian exports
Overall
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,
It is clear that
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India was always at the lowest level compared to the 3 others mentioned.
Additionally
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, the rate of China has the most significant change over the years
while
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other percentages just gradually change. Both Japan and
US
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the US
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have an upward trend in Australian export rates.
However
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, the proportion in Japan decreased clearly from over 25% to about 17% in the 22-year period
while
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in the US , the rate changed constantly but didn’t have a big difference between the beginning and the end of the period.
About
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apply
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China and India, these 2 nations have
a
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apply
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significant
difference
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differences
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in comparison to each other. The percentage of Australian exports in China rose slightly between 1990 and 2005 but rapidly 2 times rocketed to over 25%.
In contrast
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,
This
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proportion in India remains stable and just had a small increase during the period from 2000 to 2010.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • percentages
  • exports
  • trend
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • fluctuations
  • stable
  • economic ties
  • demand
  • decline
  • recovery
  • policy changes
  • trade relationship
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • temporary surge
  • specific events
  • incentives
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