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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of
people
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 aged 65 and over in three different
nations
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, namely, the
USA
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,
Sweden
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, and Japan , from 1940 to 2040. As the graph shows , the
proportion
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 of the total inhabitants aged 65 and over in the three
nations
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 is predicted to increase dramatically in 2040.
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, Japan had the lowest
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 of elderly
people
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 in 1940
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 in 2040, its residents will account for the largest
proportion
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 in comparison with other countries. Regarding the population aged 65 and over of
Usa
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 and
Sweden
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, the
USA
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 stood at around 9% , the figure for
people
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 aged 65 and over, compared with approximately 7% in
Sweden
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. The
proportion
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 of
people
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 aged 65 and over in the
USA
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 and
Sweden
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 grew significantly in 1980, at 15% and around 14% , respectively. In 1995, these two
nations
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 had decreased by about 1%.
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, the percentage in the
USA
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 remained stable at around 14% until 2020 before jumping to roughly 23% in 2040,
while
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Sweden
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 experienced a considerable rocket at 20% in 2015. After that, it went down to approximately 14% in 2025, and
finally
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, the citizen of aged 65 and over are projected to grow at 25% in 2040. In terms of Japan’s population aged 65 and over, Japan recorded the lowest
proportion
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 among the three
nations
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. The figure started at 5% in 1940, after that it slowly declined round 3% in the 1960s and remained unchanged until the early 1990s. There was a gradual rise of roughly 10% by 2030, before it is forecast that it will increase to nearly 27% in 2040.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, nations, usa, sweden, proportion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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