The graph below shows levels of online shopping by age group for different times of the day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows levels of online shopping by age group for different times of the day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The current chart below compares how many people shopped online by age group for different times of the day. In general, the percentage of
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peaked at 6am - before 8pm, and went down until 10pm onwards.
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, we can find out that most of the group’s
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increased steadily by the time of 6pm - before 8pm, except for the people between the ages 35 and 44. The group’s
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rose significantly compared to the other groups. In the case of ages 25 to 34 years old, their
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slightly dropped by 2pm - before 4pm but they soon recovered. Between the groups except those who are older than 60, ages 45 to 59 years old had the lowest peak. And we can easily find that the
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of the people who are older than 60 peaked at 9am - before 12pm
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the remaining groups. The percentage of
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dipped by the time of 12pm - before 2pm, but they dropped gradually until 10pm onwards.

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