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The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. IELTS Bar Chart

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. IELTS Bar Chart
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The bar chart compares the amount of
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Time
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time
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 each day that people from four different countries spent doing activities whilst on holiday in Greece in August 2019. The activities were going to the beach, visiting different attractions, and reading.
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, the
traveler
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 spent the most
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 reading Books
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 they spent the least
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 visiting places. The Chinese
tourists
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 spent the longest reading record with a total of eight
hours
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 per day. In
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, the Brazilians spent the longest at the beach with a total of six
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 Both the American and the Turkish
tourists
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 spent the same number of
hours
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 every day visiting places with a total of three
hours
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 each.
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, the Turkish and Brazilian groups spent a total of four
hours
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 each reading books. The Chinese
tourists
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 spent twice the amount of
time
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 reading
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 as the Turkish and Brazilian
tourists
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,
whereasthe
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whereas the
 American and
Turkishgroups
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Turkish groups
 spent three times the amount of
time
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 visiting places as the Chinese group.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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