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The table below gives give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009

The table below gives give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009
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table chart illustrates information relating to salaries that
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pay
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 for secondary and high school
teachers
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 in five countries (
Australia
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,
Denmark
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,
Luxembourg
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,
Korea
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,
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Japan
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and Japan
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) in 2009.
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, in
Luxembourg
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, when people began to become
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teacher
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teachers
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, they were receiving the highest
salary
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.
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,
this
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 country paid the highest annual income
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per year;
however
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, it took a long
time
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 to reach the highest
salary
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. With regard to
Japan
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, it paid
least
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salary
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 to
teachers
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, but they earned more
salary
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 per year than
teachers
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 in
Australia
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.
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,
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years
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the years
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 taken to reach a top
salary
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 in
Australia
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was
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did
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 not
took
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time
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 as long as
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Korea
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in Korea
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. The
number
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 of
teachers
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 in
Korea
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 spent the longest
time
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;
while
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,
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 the
number
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 of
teachers
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 in
Denmark
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 spent
least
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time
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 increasing of
salary
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. In Europe, secondary and high school
teachers
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 in
Luxembourg
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 received
starting
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a starting
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 of profit
with
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80,00 $, and their total annual
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 ranged from around112,000 $ to139,000 $.
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, these
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 took
time
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 to earn top
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salary
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salaries
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 within 30
years
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.
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, people began to become
teachers
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 in
Denmark
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 who took no longer
time
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 to reach a
highly
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salary
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 within 8
years
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 so
that
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these
teachers
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 in
Denmark
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 gained less money than
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teachers
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 in
Luxembourg
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 approximately less than half.
This
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salary
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Denmark
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not
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much higher. It maxed out at 54,000 $. In Asia, the
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 of
teachers
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 in
Korea
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 earned money for starting
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 of 30,500 $.
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their total annual
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 ranged from around 52,600 $ to 84,500 $, and they spent a lot of
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for
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growing in
this
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 career. It took a
time
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 about 37
years
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 to reach the upper
salary
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. In
Japan
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, teacher careers earned the lowest income. It started at 28,000 $
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 and increased to 49,000 $ - 62,800 $ within 34
years
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. So
teachers
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 in
Japan
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 spent a
much
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time
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 as
teachers
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 in
Korea
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 to become
an
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educator
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educators
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 who gained a top
salary
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, but
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salary
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salaries
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 in
2
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the 2
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countries were obviously different incomes. In
Australia
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, educators
received
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 money a starting
salary
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 of 34,600 $, and these
teachers
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earned
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salary
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a salary
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 per year
no
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 more than 48,000$. the
number
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 of
teachers
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 in
Australia
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 took
a
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time
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 within 9
years
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 to increase their
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salary
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salaries
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words teachers, australia, denmark, luxembourg, korea, japan, salary, time, years, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • secondary/high school teachers
  • annual salary
  • gross income
  • net salary
  • cost of living
  • education funding
  • gender pay gap
  • teaching hours
  • years of experience
  • additional qualifications
  • economic indicators
  • average wage
  • currency conversion
  • educational disparities
  • international comparison
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