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The maps below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Umar

The maps below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Umar
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The
airport
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 map illustrates information about the site states of an
airport
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 in
southwest
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the southwest
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on
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at
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this
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 moment and how it will look after reconstruction next year .
Overall
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,
comparing
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compared
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 with a new
airport
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 it will noticeably improve and
will
Verb problem
is
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 expected to extend over the given period . Now the small
airport
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 has
tiny
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a tiny
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 walkway , which can be completely full inside them making uncomfortable conditions
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for airplane
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airplane
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airplanes
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.
Moreover
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 in the southwest around
main
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the main
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 walkway around are only 8 gates . Between
plane
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the plane
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 and entrance are two passport
control
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controls
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 on the left side for security,
on the other hand
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 for customers.For citizens who
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departure,
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departure
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depart
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 there
are
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is
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 have
check in
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check-in
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 and
cafe
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 in the corner of the terminal.
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Initially
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Initially,
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 passport
check
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checks
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 for clients were made nothing for arrivals . The owners of
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airport
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the airport
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 will arrange to make
more
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it more
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 convenient circumstances for people ,thereby adding things including extended
of
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apply
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gates in the future ,in
planned
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plan
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 to triple having exactly 18 ,
also
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 the
walkaway
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walkway
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 will be longer
approximately
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by approximately
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in
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apply
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double,
that
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which
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make
Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
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better
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a better
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 environment. Both of the passport controls will
be remain
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remain
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 untouched. In the future,arrivals will see new car hire,
ATM
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ATMs
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 and
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cafe
Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
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.
In another
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Another
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 section will be relocated ,
instead
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 of
previous
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the previous
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cafe
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 will be
check
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checked
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 in ,there
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
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will be new a bad drop on
left
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the left
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 side
in
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of
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 the room ,
cafe
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 will be changed next to the departures.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words airport, cafe with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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