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The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The line graph provides information on the
quantity
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number
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 of
people
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 who ask for
asistance
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assistance
 at a tourist
center
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centre
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 in the UK, in a period of 6 months from January to June. In general, we can see that out of all
methods
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methods,
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 there is only email contact received a downward trend.
In contrast
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, the most popular method is asking face-to-face. In
details
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detail
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, the number of
people
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 who send
mails
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mail
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 to the office
fall
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fell
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 gradually from roughly 700 individuals in January to under 400 in May. After that, it
remain
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 stable until June. Meanwhile,
calllers
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callers
 to the center slightly
decrease
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decreased
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 in the first 2 months, from 900 to 800, before increasing to 1600
people
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 in June. As
regard
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 to the most popular methods, it
rise
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rises
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 significantly from over 400
people
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in
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at
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 the
begining
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beginning
 of the timeline until the end of it at 1900 requests.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Add more linking words.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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