The map below shows the development of the village of Ryrmouth between 1995 and present.

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The maps illustrate the changes that have taken place in the village of

Ryemouth

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Tynemouth

between 1995 and the present.

Overall

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, the area has undergone significant modifications, with the addition of new structures, alterations to existing facilities, and improvements in infrastructure.

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, the most noticeable changes include the expansion of housing, conversion of farmland and forest

park

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to golf and tennis, or the introduction of a car

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some features remain unchanged.

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, there was farmland and forest

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in the northeast region, which is now converted into golf and tennis. Over time, more houses are constructed for the residents on the northwest corner.

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, the car

park

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is now built near to the hotel on the south-east side of the village. Café remained at the same place.

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modifications include the removal of a fishing port on the south axis. The shops and fish markets are replaced with restaurants and apartments. The village has become more urbanized and accessible compared to its earlier form.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

165 words

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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryrmouth between 1995 and present.

School children should choose the subjects they study from a young age and stop doing subjects they find uninteresting.

The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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