▪️The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000. ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie chart depicts the money allocation for 10 different sectors on the UAE government budget report in the year 2000. All the units are measured in billions.

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, the most amount of money was allocated to social security with more than a quarter

whereas

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, the minimum amount was

seperated

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separated

trasnport

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transport

, at 9

billion

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. 53

billion

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AED is composed for Health and personal services which makes it the second most concerned class,

whereas

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, Education became the third highest with 38

billion

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Moreover

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, slightly less than one-fourth as much money

allocated

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was allocated

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to both debt interest and other

expenditure

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expenditures

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as social security which placed these classes in

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the fifith

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fifith

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fifth

position.

In addition

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to that, 22

billion

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seperated

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separated

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for

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the

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apply

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defence,

while

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billion

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for law and order,

the

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and the

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figure for housing,

herritage

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heritage

and

enviroment

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environment

stood at 15

billion

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Finally

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, 13

billion

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AED is accounted for industry agriculture and

emplotement

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employment

whereas

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billion

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is consisted

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transport.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

155 words

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▪️The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000. ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question

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Some people think that the government should provide free and universal health care for all citizens. Others think that health care is a personal responsibility and people should pay for their own medical expenses. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.