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The pie charts below show the percentage of five types of food sold by a supermarket in 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the percentage of five types of food sold by a supermarket in 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts
reveals
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reveal
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 the ratio of five distinct
food
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foods
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 -
meat
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, seafood,
eggs
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, fruits, and vegetables - sold in a supermarket in 2003 and 2013, respectively.
Overall
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, the percentage remained
consistant
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consistent
constant
 in two different years, with the ranking slightly shifted after a decade. In 2013, the most popular category was
meat
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,
while
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eggs
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being
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were
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 the least frequently bought type of goods. In 2003, vegetables
was
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 the most popular ingredients, accounting for
one-forth
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one-fourth
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 of the sales. Meanwhile,
meat
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 and
eggs
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 ranked second and third at 21% and 20%, with seafood following closely at 19%. Fruits contributed to only 15%
to
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 annual earnings, falling behind as the least commonly bought product. In 2013,
meat
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 surpassed vegetables by 2%, replacing them as the best seller of the year, taking up 25% of the sales figure.
While
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 the shares of seafood and fruits exceeded
eggs
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, making up 21% and 17% of the revenue.
Lastly
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,
eggs
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 constituted 14% of the sales, earning the least profits among all choices.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words meat, eggs with synonyms.
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