The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart displays some data about how the bourgeois spent their weekly
salary
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on
food
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, housing, fuel and power, clothing and footwear, and four other categories in 1968 and in 2018; measured in percentage.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
although
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the majority of the public’s money was spent on
food
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in 1968, people spent the highest proportion of their income on leisure in 2018. Individuals spent over 5 per
cent
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of their
salary
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on fuel and power in 1968;
however
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, under 5 per
cent
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of their weekly income was spent on fuel and power.
Furthermore
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, families spent 10 per
cent
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of their
salary
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on housing in 1968
while
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the amount of money spent on
food
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was three times more in the same year.
In addition
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, roughly 20 per
cent
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of people’s
salary
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was spent on housing and
food
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, and precisely 5 per
cent
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of folk’s income was spent on clothing and footwear in 1968.
In contrast
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,
this
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number for clothing and footwear doubled in 2018. Approximately 7 per
cent
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of the public’s weekly outcome was spent on household goods in both 1968 and 2018. The highest amount of the society’s money was spent on leisure in 2018, which was over 20 per
cent
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while
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this
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number was less than 15 per
cent
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for transport and around 5 per
cent
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for personal goods in 2018.
On the other hand
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, the proportion of
salary
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spent on personal goods, transport, and leisure was almost the same and around 10 per
cent
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in 1968.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words salary, food, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • spending patterns
  • allocated
  • weekly income
  • significant changes
  • essential items
  • food
  • housing
  • clothing
  • leisure
  • communication
  • increase
  • decrease
  • twofold rise
  • substantial increase
  • quadrupling
  • declined
  • food and drink
  • slight increase
  • prioritizing
  • necessities
  • transitioned
  • portio
  • non-essential items
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