4-The line graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

4-The line graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for 4-The line graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph depicts the patterns of how the
audience
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in
UK
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the UK
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used to watch television or listen to the
radio
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at different times of the day, during the year 1992.
Overall
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, television seems to have been a more popular medium of entertainment for the
audience
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during the evening and the night as opposed to
radio
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that
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which
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was more popular during the day, especially in the morning. Between the hours of 1am to 6am, less than around 5% of
people
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were watching the
TV
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or listening to the
radio
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. At 6am
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however
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, the amount of
people
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listening to the
radio
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begin
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begins
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to rise drastically. The figure peaked at just over 25% at around 8am. During
this
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time
period
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period,
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TV
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viewers saw no real large increase in viewers. By 1pm,
people
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watching
TV
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rose to 15%, which was the same amount for
people
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listening to the
radio
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. After
lunch time
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lunchtime
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,
radio
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continued to lose
audience
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, whilst
TV
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watchers
continue
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continued
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to rise into the evening. From around 3pm
top
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to
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6pm,
TV
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quickly increased in
audience
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, peaking at 45% of viewers at around 8-9pm.
Radio
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however
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, however
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, had fallen all the way to 5% of listening and plateaued at
this
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amount between 9 and 11pm.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words audience, radio, people, tv, pm with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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