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The maps illustrate changes happening in the city of Bates in 1950, 2000 and 2050. Summarize the given information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps illustrate changes happening in the city of Bates in 1950, 2000 and 2050. Summarize the given information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given map demonstrates information about different changes in the
city
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 from 1950 to now.
Overall
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, it can be notable that the population of the
city
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 was 20.000 in 1950,
while
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 now
this
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 figure has radically increased to 200.000.
According to
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 the map in 1950, the Business district was situated in the centre of the
city
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 and half surrounded by the Residental area. The major road was only in the
city
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 centre, whilst there was a small
bridge
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 on the river. Near the
bridge
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, a tiny residential area was erected and the Airport was extremely small. In terms of today's view of the
city
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, artificial lakes have been constructed on the river.
While
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 the old
bridge
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 has been extended, a new one has been added to another part of the lake. On the other side of the
bridge
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, a business district has been constructed,
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 the residential area has been enormously extended. Major roads have been increased in order to develop the availability of the
city
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, bridge with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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