Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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agree with it. some people are really needed so
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pay them. if they pay my course fees
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definitely
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univeristy
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because it is free of charge, but some students still don't want to study it because they think it is free of charge so if
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fail no worries. we will
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task achievement
Expand on your ideas with more details and explanations. For instance, explain why some students may feel that studying is less important if the tuition is free.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure your essay has a clear introduction that presents your main opinion, as well as a conclusion that summarises your points.
coherence and cohesion
Structure your essay with separate paragraphs for each main point. This would help improve clarity and flow.
task achievement
You express a clear opinion that the government should pay for students’ fees, which is a good basis for your argument.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Higher education
  • University tuition
  • Public good
  • Economic growth
  • Fiscal responsibility
  • Merit-based scholarships
  • Need-based grants
  • Socioeconomic status
  • Educational equity
  • Income-contingent loans
  • Graduate tax
  • Financial aid
  • Student loans
  • Subsidize
  • Taxpayer funding
  • Underappreciation
  • Workforce development
  • Access to education
  • Higher learning institutions
  • Government expenditure
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