Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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agree with it. some people are really needed so

government

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the government

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pay them. if they pay my course fees

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will

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definitely

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stay

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univeristy

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university

because it is free of charge, but some students still don't want to study it because they think it is free of charge so if

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fail no worries. we will

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start

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task achievement

Expand on your ideas with more details and explanations. For instance, explain why some students may feel that studying is less important if the tuition is free.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure your essay has a clear introduction that presents your main opinion, as well as a conclusion that summarises your points.

coherence and cohesion

Structure your essay with separate paragraphs for each main point. This would help improve clarity and flow.

task achievement

You express a clear opinion that the government should pay for students’ fees, which is a good basis for your argument.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

60 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Higher education
University tuition
Public good
Economic growth
Fiscal responsibility
Merit-based scholarships
Need-based grants
Socioeconomic status
Educational equity
Income-contingent loans
Graduate tax
Financial aid
Student loans
Subsidize
Taxpayer funding
Underappreciation
Workforce development
Access to education
Higher learning institutions
Government expenditure

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Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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