Study states that
individual’s
Correct article usage
an individual’s
nature
characteristics are far more influential than experience Replace the word
natural
can
shape Correct word choice
and can
peoples’
Change noun form
people’s
trait
and development in their later Fix the agreement mistake
traits
life
. Fix the agreement mistake
lives
However
, I believe that people’s personalities are more likely to be influenced by their Linking Words
experience
and their parent’s parenting.
The primary reason why inborn characteristics can be affected by education and work experience. School is one of the places Fix the agreement mistake
experiences
on shaping
their inner traits Change preposition
to shape
such
as some individuals are selfish and uncooperative, Linking Words
however
, Linking Words
school
contains a variety of group work which aims students Add an article
the school
can
learn how to cooperate with others. Verb problem
apply
Moreover
, Linking Words
workplace
Add an article
the workplace
also
Linking Words
influence
people to behave Change the verb form
influences
such
as people who are Linking Words
waitress
and they need to treat customers politely. Fix the agreement mistake
waitresses
As they
understand that they need to suppress their real emotions, Correct word choice
They
otherwise
, they will be fired by their employer.
Linking Words
In addition
, parenting styles are one of the reasons Linking Words
influence
their Correct pronoun usage
that influence
nature
characteristic. Replace the word
natural
This
is because people are being taught by their parents to be polite, especially children Linking Words
are
Correct pronoun usage
who are
upbring
with Correct your spelling
born
controlled
father and mother. If their children’s Correct article usage
a controlled
behavior
upsets their parents, Change the spelling
behaviour
then
they will get punishment Linking Words
from
their caretakers. Change preposition
by
Therefore
, under Linking Words
this
Linking Words
circumstance
children learn to be obedient in order to reduce punishment. Add a comma
circumstance,
For example
, some children are born with aggressive traits, Linking Words
however
, their aggressive Linking Words
behavior
will decline if they are Change the spelling
behaviour
teaching
with Wrong verb form
taught
high pressured
atmosphere.
In conclusion, innate characteristics are not the major factor Replace the word
a high-pressure
to influence
their personalities, learning in school and Change the verb form
influencing
workplace
, and parenting styles are the major Correct article usage
the workplace
factor
.Fix the agreement mistake
factors
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