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The bart chart below shows US Seafood imports between 2002 and 2022 and the forecast for 2032. The pie chart shows the geographical structure of these imports in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bart chart below shows US Seafood imports between 2002 and 2022 and the forecast for 2032. The pie chart shows the geographical structure of these imports in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart represents the
import
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 activities of
seafood
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 to the US
market
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 from 2002 and 2022, and a forecast of the
import
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 value for 2032. The pie chart depicts the
countries
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 contributing to the
import
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activites
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activities
 in 2022.
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, the US
seafood
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 levels grew steadily from 2002 to 2022. Spending over 5
billion
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 US
dollars
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 at the beginning of 2002, the
import
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 values doubled by 10
billion
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 US
dollars
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 just in ten years. Later in 2022, the amount spent to
import
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seafood
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 to the U S
market
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 reached its highest level which is about 20
billion
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 US
dollars
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. Despite
this
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 growth, it is predicted that in 2032
the
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import
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 activities will decline by 5
billion
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 US
dollars
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.
In addition
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, there are 6
countries
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 contributing to the US
Seafood
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import
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 values in 2022. These
countries
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 are Ecuador, Vietnam, Indonesia, Canada, China, and Thailand. Among these
countries
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, China and Thailand provided the biggest
import
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 values to the US
seafood
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market
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 covering up to 50% of the sources combined. China and Thailand
reported
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 to be
bringin
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bringing
 in
seafood
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 to the US
market
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 by 28% and 23% respectively. Whilst the other
countries
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 each contributed around 10% to the 
market
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words import, seafood, market, countries, billion, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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