The given line graph illustrates the change in electrical goods by ownership and
show
the comparison of time spent doing housework in households in a particular country from 1920 to 2019.
Change the verb form
shows
Overall
, the line graph depicts Linking Words
rapidly
increasing Correct article usage
a rapidly
percentage
of households with electrical appliances including washing Use synonyms
machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
and Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
vaccum
Correct your spelling
vacuum
cleaner
. Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
While
the number of Linking Words
hours
of housework per week and per household quickly decreased.
Use synonyms
To begin
with Linking Words
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
household
in 1920, the rate of refrigerators was 0 and Fix the agreement mistake
households
this
appliance more quickly Linking Words
rocket
and in 1940 was 55. From 1940 to 1980 the Wrong verb form
rocketed
percentage
of Use synonyms
refrigerator
was 100 and until 2019 Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
save
Change preposition
apply
this
trend. In the Linking Words
beginning
the Add a comma
beginning,
percent
of washing Replace the word
percentage
machine
was 40 and Fix the agreement mistake
machines
his
Correct pronoun usage
its
percentage
swiftly improved by 1960 and by 1980 a little decreased. From 1980 to 2019 the Use synonyms
percentage
of washing machine becomes gradually increased. The proportion of vacuum Use synonyms
cleaner
in 1920 was 30 and by 1980 steadily boosted and was already 100 percent. From 2000 to 2019 the trend has not changed.
The next is Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
hours
of housework per week, per household. In 1920 number of Use synonyms
hours
per week was 50 Use synonyms
hours
and quickly diminished by 1960. From 1960 to 2019 amount of time Use synonyms
become
slowly Verb problem
apply
come
down and it was approximately 10 Wrong verb form
came
hours
by 1920.Use synonyms
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