he pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

he pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts depict the proportion of
time
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spent on multiple activities by working adults in one country between two
years
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(1958 and 2008).
Overall
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, in both
years
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people spent the highest amount of
time
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working.
In contrast
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, the lowest percentage was
traveling
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travelling
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to work in 1958 and going out in 2008. The activity that most adults spent
time
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on was working in 1958 and 2008, accounting for 33% and 42%, respectively.
On the other hand
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, sleeping came second to working with a percentage of 32% in the first year,
whereas
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it decreased by 7% (25%) in the second year.
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, people’s interest in going out declined over the fifty
years
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, with a proportion of 19% in 1958 and 6% in 2008.
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, travel to work’s
time
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increased over the fifty
years
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from 2% to 8%.
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, both relaxing at home and other interests or playing sports rose in 2008, accounting for 13% and 8%, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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