Many people believe that modern inventions have brought more problems than benefits. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons to your answer, and required examples.

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by defining what modern
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are, modern
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are basically technological advancements made by
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and
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professionals
in different fields and areas of specialization, which
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either improved upon a previously existent concept or invented something
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completely
new. Technological
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advances
and new
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have been in existence for many decades and have evolved through different generations. To say modern
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have brought more problems than benefits would be a complete misinterpretation of facts. I am rather of the opinion that modern
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have been more helpful to our human existence and
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completely aided human interaction and communication.
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are different modern
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which include cars, home appliances, mobile communication devices, health tracking devices, etc. all these have in one way or
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other aided humans in
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some sort of goal or task,
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has
inadverterdly
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inadvertently
improved
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efficiency and turn around
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for most of the daily
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activities
. These activities taken over by modern
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would ordinarily have been either burdensome or
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time consuming
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.
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take into consideration cars and other forms of transportation, these modern
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have made it possible to move from point A to point B in a rather timely manner, reducing commute
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to and fro different destinations. Home appliances like
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washing machines have assisted in ensuring
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are washed with less human interaction, thereby giving the individual the
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to focus on
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, mobile communication devices have come to
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redefine how information travels from one location to another, giving individuals that are thousands of miles apart the ability to communicate in realtime. These are but just a few
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of the numerous
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reasons
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why modern
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have offered more benefits than problems as stated in the argument.

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Improve the introduction by providing a clearer thesis statement that directly answers the question.
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Ensure that all paragraphs are cohesive and follow a clear structure (e.g., using linking words to connect ideas).
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Remove spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'proffesionals' should be 'professionals', 'completly' should be 'completely', 'inadverterdly' should be 'inadvertently', 'there' should be 'their', 'acheving' should be 'achieving', 'cloths' should be 'clothes', 'to and fro' should be 'to and from').
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The essay provides relevant examples of modern inventions and their impact, showing a good understanding of the topic.
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The writer demonstrates enthusiasm and clear opinions regarding the benefits of modern inventions, which enriches the argument.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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