The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The diagram illustrates
2D
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a 2D
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plan for a common central library of two decades ago and how it is currently.
This
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essay shall outline the comparison of both and demonstrate the
relevent
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relevant
points and major changes. The entry
is
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looks similar
are
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to what
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it was
before
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apply
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20 years ago. other than that all 4
corner
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corners
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has
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have
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been redeveloped. Build as new
catagory
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category
. In
fornt
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front
of entrance in
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the center
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center
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centre
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sitting area has
demolished
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been demolished
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whereas
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towards
right
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the right
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side reception/
enquriy
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enquiry
desk has been renovated in a cafe. Going ahead in first there was only adult
not
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, not
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fiction book has removed and it
have
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has
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been
mordernised
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modernised
modernized
in three different
catagories
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categories
and they
are change
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change
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with Adult fiction novels, information desk,
self service
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self-service
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machnies
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machines
for drinks.
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, on the
right hand
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right-hand
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side we move towards
north
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the north
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there
was
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is
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children's
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a children's
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room
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converted into a lecture
room
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.
At
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comparison, now again back to
entrance
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the entrance
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from there turn left side reading
newpaper
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newspaper
or magazine
room
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made into
computer
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the computer
a computer
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lab.
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further
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Further
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ahead fiction novel area
convert
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converted
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into all reference books have been kept.
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of
left
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the left
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CDs ,
video
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the video
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game
room
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size has expanded and
ture
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turned
into a
story telling
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storytelling
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area
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along
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apply
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with
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apply
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this
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sitting(couch) is
also
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accomodating
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accommodating
accommodation
for people to sit and
listen
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listen to
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the story at the same time
childrens
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children's
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books are
also
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kept in the same corner.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
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