The graph shows the proportion of energy that was produced from coal in four European countries from 1995 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph illustrates the ratio of energy that was manufactured from coal in four regions (Sweden, France, Denmark, and

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) between 1995 and 2010.

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it is clear that

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in three distinct countries (Sweden, France, and Denmark) the production dropped gradually over the

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,

while

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the project in

Germany

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decreased steadily in 12

years

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(1995 to 2007).

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, It is noteworthy that the figure in

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germany

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Germany

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has raised

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in 2010. The figures

of

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for

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several regions

has

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experienced a decline on a year-to-year basis.

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, the energy industrialization in Sweden stood at nearly 40 per cent in 1995.

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,

this

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number

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unproductive three

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later, with 30 per cent.

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, the proportion

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lower in 2004

with

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apply

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slight

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below 30

percent

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per cent

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. Meanwhile, in 1995,

france

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France

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and

denmark

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Denmark

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percentage of coal exploration accounted for 30% and

slight

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above 30 per cent each.

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, six

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later, the ratio is going down in those countries, with

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above 20% and 30% respectively.

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in

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Germany

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's coal extraction

was dropping

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in a large number, with

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a slight

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above 50 in 1995,

however

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, six

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later, the figure indicates a significant unproductivity with

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slight

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above 20 in 2001. In 2007,

Germany

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's extraction rate

is

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at

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lowest,

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for below 10% in total. Despite

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, the number was going up in 2010,

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for

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below 20%.