The table below shows the mounthly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the mounthly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows the mounthly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
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table illustrates several data points about the average
Australian
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living cost per month in 1991 and 2001.
According to
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the data, generally,
Australian
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citizens in families had to
expend
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spend
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more in 2001 compared with 1991, but there were two exceptions: clothing and transportation.
Although
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the
price
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of utilities had increased from 1991 to 2001, the
price
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of buying clothes and transportation in the city had dropped. In 1991, an
Australian
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family had to pay $30 per month
for preparing
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their clothes,
while
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this
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price
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had experienced an unpredictable decrease by 2001. The same was true for the
price
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of transportation. The amount spent in 1991 was $70 monthly,
whereas
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it had decreased in 2001.
In contrast
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, the total
price
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of utilities, food, housing, and other services for
Australian
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families had a noticeable rise
overall
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.
Whereas
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utility costs had the most significant increase from $75 to $120 during
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period, food prices and housing experienced a smaller increase, just $5 each, from $155 to $160 and from $95 to $100. Another significant rise was from $250 to $270 in other goods and services.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words australian, price with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • average family
  • significant changes
  • substantial increases
  • categories of expenditure
  • inflation
  • lifestyle changes
  • economic factors
  • cost of living
  • monthly expenditure
  • overall trend
  • comparisons
  • ten-year period
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