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The table below shows the percentage of first-year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by their college, for three courses. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate. #table #task1

The table below shows the percentage of first-year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by their college, for three courses. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate. #table #task1
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the table below illustrates the proportions of first-year students who gave a good rating to the resources included by their university. the measure was for three subjects.
overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
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commerce reached a peak of average percentages compared to the other courses. at the same time, the Law has reached the lowest rates
in
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 the five options.
to begin
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 with, the Economics Field hit a low of Pre-courses information option by 59% to become the lowest figure in
this
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 schedule.
also
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,
Other
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the Other
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resources's
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resources
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number is
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are
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 so close
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to
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 60%.
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in
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 contrast, the other three choices are between 81%-95%.
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, the Law course did not reach over 80% rate. it achieved between 62 per cent and 80 per cent.
in addition
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, it recorded the lowest level of numbers.
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, Commerce has the top rating in every cell of the table except Teaching because it
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 with
the
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Economics's
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Economics
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one
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