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The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with data opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with data opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table displays information about underground railway systems in different cities which describe the year of opened, how length of the route, and figures for
passengers
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 per year in millions.
Overall
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, it is clearly observed that
London
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 is the oldest railway
whereas
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Los
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Angeles
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 is the latest one.
Moreover
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,
London
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also
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 had the longest route.
However
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, the city which had the highest rate of
passengers
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 is Tokyo.
To begin
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 with, it can be deduced from
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the table
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 that the cities are arranged from the oldest to the latest one.
London
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 was the first one opened in 1863 ,
secondly
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 Paris, Tokyo, Washington and Kyoto in the 18th century, and
then
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 the
last
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 railway in
Los
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Angeles
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 was opened in 2001.
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,
London
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 again came at the top of the table in the longest subway
according to
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 other cities by 394.
On the other hand
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,
Los
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Angeles
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 and Kyoto hit the shorter railways by 26, and 11 kilometres, respectively.
Last
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 but not least, Tokyo had the maximum figures of
passengers
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 by 1926 million,
then
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 Paris by 1191 million.
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, Kyoto and
Los
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Angeles
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 had the minimum number of
passengers
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 of 45 and 50 million, respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words passengers, london, los, angeles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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