Most societies are based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they wanted, society could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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socities
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society
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a house
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a peaceful
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peace
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task achievement
Strengthen your introduction by clearly stating your opinion and mentioning the main points you will discuss in your essay.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that your concluding statement summarizes your main argument more explicitly and reinforces your opinion.
coherence and cohesion
Try to use more varied vocabulary and complex sentence structures to improve the overall readability of your essay.
task achievement
You have made a clear stance on the issue, expressing your strong agreement with the importance of laws and rules.
task achievement
You provided relevant examples to support your points, such as household rules and road safety, which helps to illustrate your arguments.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite