Nowadays, mothers
outside the house more than ever, which
makeCorrect subject-verb agreement
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it harder for women to follow the
traditionReplace the word
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gender role of taking
of children.
, I believe parenting is
jobCorrect article usage
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mustCorrect pronoun usage
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done
myCorrect your spelling
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the two parent, mother should not
all the weight of parenting on her
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,
fathersCorrect word choice
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should step up to the new challenges that
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modern families are facing
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In
I will
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matter.
Mothers were and still
alwaysAdd a missing verb
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the
primerCorrect your spelling
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caregiverFix the agreement mistake
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;
, in the
they were getting
helpsCorrect subject-verb agreement
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from
females memberFix the agreement mistake
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of
familyFix the agreement mistake
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.
, in
and age mothers
and outside the home ,doing everything
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herCorrect pronoun usage
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own without
hands.
, my grandmother was taking
of me, when my mom was at
. As
resultCorrect article usage
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: it helped my mom to have
and life balance at that
.
, I think as long that the
and wife
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to have kids, they must talk about the role of each one of them in raising
kids. It is
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not fair for one parent to have the whole
of
offspring
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their own.
, my father
was helpingWrong verb form
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my mother by taking
dutyFix the agreement mistake
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as he
canWrong verb form
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, like
takeWrong verb form
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of my hospital
appointmentFix the agreement mistake
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and
driveWrong verb form
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me to my school.
, co-parenting is good for both parties,by
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and
createWrong verb form
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memoryAdd an article
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with
child,
,
helpCorrect subject-verb agreement
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both of my parent to have more free
for
them selvesCorrect your spelling
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.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that children need the
of both parents, so they can have a bond and create
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as a family. It
notAdd a missing verb
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only about taking
and doing the daily
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, it is
about raising kids well and
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them value through being
a role modelsCorrect the article-noun agreement
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.