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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The graph demonstrates the income of United States
households
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that is
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 generated annually, in USD, for the
years
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 2007, 2011
as well as
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 2015. During these three
years
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, the
households
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 showing the lowest incomes include a slight increase before declining once more. In comparison, the total of middle-income families' financial situation stayed constant.
Furthermore
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, the high-income
households
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 illustrate a small decrease in numbers in the early stages of the graph,
while
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 inclining again in 2015. Interestingly, it is clear to see that in 2011, the diagram represents an increase of
households
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 receiving less than
25 000
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25,000
 or reaching up to 49,999 dollars, by 4
million
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.
However
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,
this
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 caused a reduction of 2
million
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 respectively, in incomes 75 to over 100 thousand in the same year.
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, the intermediate salary groups, receiving 50,000 to 74,999, remained at 21
million
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 throughout the
years
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. By the end of 2015,
households
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who
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 received more than 0.1
million
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 dollars increased roughly to 33
million
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. Contrastingly, a growing economy with
households
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 earning less than a third of 0.1
million
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, created a decrease of 1
million
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households
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. Concluding
at
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33
million
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households
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 in totality that remained. Ultimately,
this
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 graph depicts that over the course of the
years
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, there has been an increase in financial growth.
Thus
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, a positive effect on the economy represents growth.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, years, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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