The maps illustrate the development of Porth Harbour over a period of two decades, from the year 2000 to the present

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The plans illustrate the development of porth Harbour over a period of 2 decades, from the year 2000.

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the basic structure has remained largely unchanged. A brand-new dock has been added on the north side,

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,the roads are extended on the southern side of the horbour. In detail, On the southeastern side of the harbour. the castle which was disused in 2000 has been replaced by a hotel.

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, the public beach has been privatized and now a part of hotel. Cafes and shops are

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been introduced along the way leading to the main road from the hotel. Meanwhile, the parking place of fishing boats has been converted into a private yachts marine,

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former marina for private yachts now accomodates fishing boats.

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, the car parking which is located in the south is now accessible directly from the main road.

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, an extra set showers and toilets has been installed beside

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car parking.

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, a new dock has been introduced near the passenger ferries,providing space for additional ferry.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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4 paragraphs

172 words

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The maps illustrate the development of Porth Harbour over a period of two decades, from the year 2000 to the present

Music has always been and continues to be the universal language of mankind. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Email is a fast and convenient way to communicate, and written letters aren’t needed anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In some societies the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. What are the reasons for this trend? And what possible solutions could reduce this issue?

Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.