The graph below shows in formation about the languages that 13-year-old students in one school chose to study. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows in formation about the languages that 13-year-old students in one school chose to study. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows in formation about the languages that 13-year-old students in one school chose to study. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart line above
decbite
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describes
the languages the
13 year old
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chose to
study
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in school. In 2000 we see most
students
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chose to
study
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French by nearly 150
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student
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students
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, and less than 10
students
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select
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selected
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Mandarin
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.
It's
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It
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look
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looks
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like The
poplarity
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popularity
of
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Mandarin
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the Mandarin
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language
increases
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increased
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in 2003 their was more than 40
students
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chose
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who chose
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to
study
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Mandarin
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and by 2005 they
reach
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reached
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to
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their peak
for
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of
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approxmatily
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approximately
70
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student
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students
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.
In
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the other hand
student
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that was
studing
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studying
French in 2003
decline
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declined
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to
near
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nearly
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100
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student
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students
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and in 2005
was
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were
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the
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at the
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bottom
as
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at
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90
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student
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students
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.
Know in present
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the
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apply
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both languages are near each other
on
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in
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the number of
students
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that select to
study
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them, but French
have
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has
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more
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student
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students
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than
Mandarin
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by
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apply
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10
students
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approxmatily
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approximately
.
To sum up
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, the
differnce
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difference
differences
in early
of
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apply
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2000 was huge but by the time it
decline
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declined
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to reach about 10
students
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from
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apply
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it was 140
students
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between these two languages.

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