You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter: say what the problem is describe the accommodation you thought you were getting ask the provider to solve the problem

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Dear Mr. John, I am writing

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letter to inform you regarding the accommodation which was provided to me, as my course duration is only for 6 months and I am not planning to buy a car and I am not interested in public transport to travel from my new house to school as I can assume that

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time might be 45min which is 30km far from a place to school.

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, I was assuming that there

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be a college hostel or any private room near by street I do not have any problem

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a sharing basis either. If there is a meal facility it will be more helpful though. Apart from that if you can provide a computer desk and other facilities like wifi would be grateful I was considering all of these to stay until my course completion .

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, I request you to solve the problem by considering my thoughts I know it might be a hassle for you but it will be convenient for me during my course time. I hope to

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from you soon yours Sincerely

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varsha.varu156Wed Mar 19 2025

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Task Achievement

Make sure to clearly state the specific problem with the accommodation at the beginning of your letter. It will help set the context for your request.

Coherence and Cohesion

Consider dividing your letter into clearer paragraphs to improve the flow of information. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea to enhance clarity.

General

Try to use more varied vocabulary and sentence structures to make your writing more engaging and sophisticated.

Tone

You maintained a polite and respectful tone throughout the letter, which is important for effective communication.

Content

Your letter includes specific requests which shows you have thought about your needs.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

186 words

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