Technologies like AI and Robotics are automating many human jobs and helping to maximize company profits. However, this may result in a new wave of mass unemployment and government should step in to regulate these fields. Discuss arguments for both sides and give your opinion.

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Artificial Intelligence is playing
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created by
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and mostly used in larger
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to save time and effort.
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because of robots which will
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unemployment
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I will discuss both the statements and conclude with my opinion. To embark upon, robotics are primary resource of many large
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to make things quickly and make profits, countries like
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a shortage of labour.
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, few machines are operated by
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they do not
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but nowadays these are coming with fully automated as they work like
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. Apart from that these
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that developing population and modern technology AI is the part of solution to make things better.
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sector and food industries are making much money in less time which is
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as well.
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has
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increased similar to that
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are required but robotics has
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snatched the income of
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families
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as unemployment rate to control
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Government should come up with a new scheme where
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can have more supervision work than machines. Moving
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, AI is not useful in many sectors like
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, few things should be done manually.
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like Amazon and Microsoft should come up with the idea to restrict robots from manpower to save unemployment. In my opinion, manpower is more important than robotics which is
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fact from our ancestors.
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companies
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company
profits can be shared
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staff who are operating those robots,
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, AI may be important to save
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and effort of mankind but it is not useful in every place and situation because it still needs human support,
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jobs
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should be increased.

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You present a balanced view by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of AI and robotics.
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You express a clear personal opinion at the end, which strengthens your argument.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Automation
  • Job displacement
  • Efficiency
  • Productivity
  • Economic growth
  • Income inequality
  • Reskilling
  • Workplace safety
  • Ethical concerns
  • Oversight
  • Regulation
  • Retraining
  • Social unrest
  • Innovation
  • Technological advancement
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