In recent
years
, more individuals Use synonyms
choice
to Wrong verb form
have chosen
bring
children later in their Verb problem
have
life time
. In my opinion, Correct your spelling
lifetime
this
trend is more beneficial, Linking Words
becasue
of the change in the way of living compared to Correct your spelling
because
older
generation; Add an article
the older
whereas
, young adults have to study Linking Words
over
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for over
years
to get a Use synonyms
liveable
wage. Correct word choice
livable
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, Linking Words
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this days
, Change the determiner
this day
these days
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job
market Correct article usage
the job
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
extremly
competitive more than ever, which makes young adults delay the idea of marriage and children till they have a stable Correct your spelling
extremely
job
and salary. In Use synonyms
this
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essay
I will Add a comma
essay,
dicuss
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discuss
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this
matters in detail.
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these
To begin
with, it is more challenging for the youth to have a decent Linking Words
job
without a Use synonyms
univeristy
degree Correct your spelling
university
unlike
the previous generation who have a Add the comma(s)
, unlike
job
without it. Use synonyms
For instance
, my father Linking Words
have have
a Wrong verb form
has
job
with fairly paid Use synonyms
wage
with only high school certificates, Fix the agreement mistake
wages
while
I need to have a Linking Words
bachelor
degree for the same Change noun form
bachelor's
job
title but with Use synonyms
less
salary. As Fix the agreement mistake
a lower
result
, my generation Correct article usage
a result
need
to study more and have Change the verb form
needs
years
of work Use synonyms
experiance
so they can have Correct your spelling
experience
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a respecitful
respecitful
amount of money to get married and create a family.
Correct your spelling
respectful
On the other hand
, Linking Words
their
is a huge issue in the current Replace the word
there
job
market, Use synonyms
their
is a Replace the word
there
hug
number of unemployed individuals, Correct your spelling
huge
the
majority of them are new graduates who could not find a Correct word choice
and the
job
Use synonyms
specially
in their sector. Replace the word
especially
For example
, my brother Linking Words
which
was a new Correct pronoun usage
who
grauduates
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graduates
graduate
in
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of
medecin
college, Correct your spelling
medical
find
a Wrong verb form
found
job
in Use synonyms
rural
area after being unemployed for three Add an article
a rural
years
: even Use synonyms
thought
, that he Correct your spelling
though
is
a doctor he Wrong verb form
was
need
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needed
long
time and effort to find a Correct article usage
a long
job
in a hospital. Use synonyms
Therefore
, having Linking Words
Correct article usage
a univeristy
univeristy
degree Correct your spelling
university
on
Change preposition
in
high demand
fields is not Add a hyphen
high-demand
gaurantee
anyone to have a Correct your spelling
guarantee
guaranteed
job
right immediately.
In conclusion, it is clear Use synonyms
because of
Change preposition
that in
current
Add an article
the current
job
market and the Use synonyms
uncertaintly
Correct your spelling
uncertainty
for
what the future holds, Change preposition
about
makes
many adults decide to have children when they have Verb problem
apply
more
stable livelihood , so they can give their offspring Add an article
a more
good
life.Correct article usage
a good
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