The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016.

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who visit four clinics in one hospital on a weekly basis between 2010 and 2016.

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with eye and diabetic diseases increased significantly

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remained fairly unchanged in terms of dental and

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other diseases. In 2010, around 125

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hospital in terms of eye problems, which marginally rose to 150 by 2012. After

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surged to 350 in 2016. If we look at the

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of diabetic

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, it showed negligible changes, the

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started at well above 50 in 2010, a

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increased fairly stable, reaching 80 in 2014. there was a noticeable rise to 180 in 2016.

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and dental treatments remained almost constant. the

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started at slightly under 250 in 2010, but

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was followed by a marginal decline to around 190 in 2014. Despite mild fluctuations, the

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staged a recovery to its 2010 level

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with dental problems, there was a slight fall from 100 in 2010 to 50 in 2012. Despite a marginal decline, it experienced a considerable rise to 170 in 2016.