The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

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The flow chart shows the

poccess

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process

of the geothermal power plant. It has 6 important facilities called

Cold

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Coldwater

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water

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, the injection well, the production well,

condenser

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the condenser

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turbine

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the turbine

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and

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the genarator

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genarator

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generator

. First of all, there was a pool used for

storaging

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storing

the cold

water

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Secondly

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, the cold

water

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pumped

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was pumped

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down

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into

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the injection well which was built 4.5km beneath the ground.

Thirdly

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water

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the water

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passed by the

geothermial

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geothermal

zone, it was a place surrounded by plenty of hot rocks. After

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water

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the water

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reacted

absolutly

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absolutely

with the hot rocks, the

tempreture

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temperature

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water

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the water

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rose a lot, and

water

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arrived at the production well.

Forthly

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Fourthly

, the condenser will

storage

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store

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the hot

water

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pumped up from the production well and

expressed

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express

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steam to the

turbine

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. At

last

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, the

steam powered

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steam-powered

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the

turbine

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, the

turbine

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spinned

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spun

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so fast and the

turbine

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also

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powered the generator, the generator operated and produced electricity. The generator transmitted electricity

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the tower.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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2 paragraphs

150 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

geothermal energy
generate electricity
diagram
volcano
magma reservoirs
deep underground
heat
steam
geothermal plant
turbine
condensed
pumped back
underground reservoirs
transmitted
power grid
distribution
continuous
renewable
volcanic activity

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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the past employees worked for small businesses but now many are working for large businesses. What are the advantages and dis advantages of this trend ?

Unemployment is one of the most serious problems facing developed nations today. What are the advantages and/or disadvantages of reducing the working week to thirty five hours?