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Part 1 The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ' income in 2007,2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Part 1 The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ' income in 2007,2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides insight into the quantities of domestic units in the US by their yearly remuneration across specific groups - below $25000, $25000-$49999, $50000-$74999, $75000-$99999, and above $100000- in the years 2007, 2011 and 2015. In general, all income groups experienced fluctuation in the
number
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 of
households
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 in the given period.
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, the above $100000
group
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 ranked first position in 2007 and 2015,
however
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,
this
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 position in 2011 was overtaken by the $25000-$49999 bracket. The
number
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 of
households
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 who earned $75000-$99999 consistently remained the lowest ratio. In detail, there were nearly 30
million
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households
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 earning above $100000 in 2007,
it
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then
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 descended to 25
million
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 approximately in 2011
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 and
finally
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 peaked at 38
million
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 in 2015. The
number
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 of
households
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 that had wages ranging from $25000-$49999 was 27
million
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 in 2007, in 2011 it even surpassed the above $100000
group
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 which became the highest count at 30
million
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, but the figure
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 decreased negligibly to 28
million
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.
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, the below $25000
group
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 mirrored
this
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 trend. The under $25000
group
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's count started at 25
million
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 in 2007,
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 it rose significantly to 28
million
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 before slightly declining to 26
million
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. Moving on to the remaining categories, the
number
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 of domestic units that earned $50000-$74999 yearly remained the same in three years at 21
million
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.
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, before reaching 15
million
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 in 2015, the ratio of $75000-$99999 witnessed a decline from nearly 15
million
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 in 2007 to 14
million
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 in 2011.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, households, group, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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