IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The chart and table provide insights into the activities of
Anthropology
Use synonyms
graduates
Use synonyms
 from a university after completing their undergraduate degrees,
as well as
Linking Words
 their salaries after five years of
work
Use synonyms
. The pie chart illustrates the distribution of
Anthropology
Use synonyms
graduates
Use synonyms
 across various activities post-graduation. The largest group, 52%, are engaged in full-time
work
Use synonyms
, indicating that more than half of the
graduates
Use synonyms
 entered the workforce directly. The second-largest segment, 15%,
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
show examples
 unemployed, which suggests a notable portion struggled to find employment. Meanwhile, 12% of
graduates
Use synonyms
 are pursuing full-time postgraduate studies, showing a significant interest in
further
Linking Words
 education. Part-time
work
Use synonyms
 accounts for 8% of
graduates
Use synonyms
, and an equal percentage (8%) are involved in both part-time
work
Use synonyms
 and postgraduate studies.
Finally
Linking Words
, 5% of
graduates
Use synonyms
 fall into the "not known" category, indicating uncertainty about their activities. In summary, most
Anthropology
Use synonyms
graduates
Use synonyms
 from
this
Linking Words
 university enter full-time employment (52%),
while
Linking Words
 15% remain unemployed, and 20% pursue
further
Linking Words
 studies. After five years, salaries vary significantly by sector: government roles offer the highest earnings, with 50% of workers earning $100,000 or more,
while
Linking Words
 freelancers tend to earn less, with 48% in the $25,000–$50,000 range. Private sector salaries fall between these two, with a more even distribution across salary bands.
This
Linking Words
 data highlights the diverse paths
Anthropology
Use synonyms
graduates
Use synonyms
 take and the varying financial outcomes depending on their chosen sector.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further, while".
▼
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words anthropology, graduates, work with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
▼
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Anthropology graduates
  • undergraduate degree
  • employment sectors
  • academic research
  • non-profit organizations
  • government agencies
  • private sector employment
  • further studies
  • unemployed
  • salary range
  • earning sectors
  • salary disparities
  • career trajectories
  • financial outcomes
  • market value
  • general employment trends
  • relative market value
What to do next:
Look at other essays: