The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie
chart
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depicts the percentage of anthropology
graduates
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working different types of jobs and the ones who are working
along-with
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their studies. The tabulation
chart
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represents the salary of
graduates
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after working in 3 sectors (freelancers,
government
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employees and private employees).
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, the
chart
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indicates that
majority
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the majority
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of
graduates
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areworking
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are working
full-time i.e. 52% followed by 15% of
part time
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part-time
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workers
whereas
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12% of degree holders are unemployed.
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, an equal percentage (8%) of full-time
post graduate
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postgraduate
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and not known students is depicted in
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chart
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the chart
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.
Furthermore
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, there are only 5 per cent of students
whi
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who
are working part-time and
also
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pursing
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pursuing
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their
post graduation
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post-graduation
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.
Whereas
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,
tabular
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the tabular
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chart
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shows that
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government
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the government
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sector
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pays
highest
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the highest
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salary
being
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$100,000 plus to its 50 per cent employees
while
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freelancers and private companies pay
same
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the same
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amount to their 40% and 30%
workers
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of workers
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respectively. Ergo, the lowest percentage of 5 for freelancers and
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government
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the government
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sector
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while
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10 for
private
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the private
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sector
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falls in
category
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the category
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of $25,000 to $49,00 salary.
Overall
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,
majority
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the majority
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of
graduates
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are working full-time and
highest
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the highest
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saliers
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salaries
to
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for
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anthropologists are paid
bu
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by
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government
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the government
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sector
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, graduates, government, sector with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "depicts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Anthropology graduates
  • undergraduate degree
  • employment sectors
  • academic research
  • non-profit organizations
  • government agencies
  • private sector employment
  • further studies
  • unemployed
  • salary range
  • earning sectors
  • salary disparities
  • career trajectories
  • financial outcomes
  • market value
  • general employment trends
  • relative market value
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