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The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates how many
people
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 lived in New Zealand in 2011 and 2012. The data is divided into five groups and shows the change percentage of each
group
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the highest proportion was the productive
age
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, between 15 and 39 years old. In 2011, the total population was exactly 4.381.269. In the next year, the number of
people
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 increased moderately to more than 4400
thousand
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, with the percentage of change being 0,6%. For
people
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 aged below 15, in 2011, there were below 900
thousand
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people
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 in New Zealand, which decreased slightly to exactly 896
thousand
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 in the next year. There was
also
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 the same with the 15-39
age
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group
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, which decreased in 2012 by 0,6% The
age
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group
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 40 to 44 years old had a different experience than the
age
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group
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 15 to 39 years old. In 2011, the 40-44
age
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group
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 was around 1331
thousand
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 and increased slightly to below 1340
thousand
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. The oldest
group
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 was not as much as the groups before, even though the
increament
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increase
 was the highest. From below 580
thousand
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 in 2011, it rose significantly to almost 600
thousand
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, group, age, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population growth
  • age group
  • increase
  • decline
  • elderly population
  • aging population
  • working-age population
  • stable labor force
  • modest increase
  • significant change
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