The graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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This

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graph demonstrates

about

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the individuals who visited Caribbean

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island

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islands

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and

staying

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stayed

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on different sites; on cruise

ship

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ships

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, on

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island

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the island

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and in total from the

year

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years

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2010 to 2017.

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the number of total

tourist

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gradually

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increase

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increased

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and

remains

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stable for many years but if we look at the visitors who stayed on cruise

ship

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ships

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and

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island

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islands

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they showed a modest

increase

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To begin

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, look at the data of total visitors that started from 1

million

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in 2010 and ended at 3.

million

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in 2017.

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, looking at the data of the visitors who stayed on

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island

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the island

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saw an

increase

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from 0.5

million

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to 1.5

million

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till 2015 after there

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a slight decline but

remain

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remained

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stable

at the end

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of the period.

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considering the

tourist

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tourists

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staying

staing

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staying

cruise

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a cruise

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ship

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ships

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, it started from almost 0.25

million

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and in one year saw an

increase

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of 0.5

million

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after that the consumption

flucuated

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fluctuated

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and we can we constant growth as it ended in 2017 at 2

million

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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, increase, million with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

169 words

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The graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about other cultures of other people. We can learn just as much as from books, films, and the internet. Do you agree or disagree?

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