The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
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The given pie charts compare the
nutritions
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nutrition
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in
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of
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two main dishes, namely medium baked potato and macaroni.
It is clear that
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carbohydrates outweigh other nutritional contents in both dishes.
On the other hand
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, the content of protein in medium baked potato differs significantly
fom
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from
macaroni
while
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others differ slightly from each other. The contents of
carbohydrate
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carbohydrates
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in
medium
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a medium
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baked potato and macaroni
is
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are
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the most, which are 35% and 52%
in contrast
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to

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutritional consistency
  • carbohydrates
  • proteins
  • fats
  • vitamins
  • minerals
  • fiber
  • proportion
  • component
  • pie graph
  • comparison
  • significant
  • balance
  • healthy
  • dietary choices
  • implications
  • absent
  • presence
  • macro-nutrients
  • micro-nutrients
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