The line graph illustrates that the amount of coffee sent abroad from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. A glance at the graph reveals that all of the exports reached a higher capacity than in the begining.

The line graph illustrates that the amount of coffee sent abroad from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. A glance at the graph reveals that all of the exports reached a higher capacity than in the begining.
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The line chart depicts the coffee exports from three
countries
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:
Brazil
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, Colombia, and
Costa
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Rica
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. Units are measured in million
kilogram
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kilograms
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.
Overall
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, by the end of the period,
Brazil
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was the highest exporter among all
countries
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, Colombia was the lowest,
while
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Costa
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Rica
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's exports were in between.
To begin
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with, in 2002,
Costa
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Rica
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had the highest value of 15
Mkg
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compared to
Brazil
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and Colombia at around 13
Mkg
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and 5
Mkg
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respectively. Shortly after
that
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it declined to more than 5
Mkg
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before ending at 20
Mkg
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by 2012.
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,
Brazil
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was slightly lower than
Costa
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Rica
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in the beginning,
however
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, it increased gradually
until
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25
Mkg
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(highest value) by 2012, regardless of the decrease from 2008 to 2010 ranging between 15 and 20
Mkg
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.
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,
although
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all
countries
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had moderately fluctuated,
Costa
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Rica
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had a dramatic increase and decrease over time. It started to increase from 5
Mkg
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to just more than 10
Mkg
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by 2006,
then
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it fell down to the lowest figure in all
countries
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at approximately 2
Mkg
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by 2008. Despite that, recovered to reach 15
Mkg
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by 2012.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, brazil, costa, rica, mkg with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Illustrates
  • Amount
  • Exported
  • Abroad
  • Capacity
  • Trends
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Significant
  • Peaks
  • Troughs
  • Reasons
  • Climate
  • Demand
  • Trade policies
  • Compare and contrast
  • Fluctuations
  • Economic conditions
  • Agricultural developments
  • Unique elements
  • Production scale
  • Market strategy
  • Global coffee demand
  • Agricultural technology
  • International trade agreements
  • Competitiveness
  • Quality
  • Reputation
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