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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
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The diagram illustrates the layout of a public library in the
last
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 20 years and now.
Overall
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, it is evident that numerous major changes took place including the removal of tables and chairs in the middle and the introduction of sofas, and self-service machines.
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 all other areas are replaced with the addition of modernised amenities. By observing the chart, it can be seen that in 1995, there were CDs, videos and computer games in the north-west corner, which is now replaced with storytelling events and children's fiction
books
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. Meanwhile, the adult fiction
books
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 and the computer room were in the
south-west
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southwest
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 of the library, but at
present
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 there are all reference
books
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 and the computer room. Tables and chairs are removed from the middle of the area.
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, there is a cafe on the southeast side, which was an enquiry desk (tickets, book returns) in the past. Information desk and self-service machines are installed
along with
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 adult fiction
books
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 in the place of adult non-fiction
books
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. The children's
books
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 on the north side of the plan
is
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 replaced with a lecture room.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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