The charts below give information about world spending and population. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about world spending and population. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below give information about world spending and population. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts illustrate the principal sectors of
world
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expenditures,
along with
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the percentages of the
world
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population in specific areas.
It is clear that
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the most significant amount of money people spend on food and transport,
as well as
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other expenses,
whereas
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the least sizable proportion of money goes on clothing and housing.
Overall
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, by far the most populated continent of the
world
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is Asia,
while
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in
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apply
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Europe, America, and Africa
reside
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have
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much lower
number
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numbers
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of inhabitants there. Focusing first on the main types of
world
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spending, 40% of income citizens allocate for other expenses,
whereas
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for food and transport, the corresponding figures are 24 and 18 per cent, respectively. A small minority of money is utilised on housing and clothing, with 12 and 6 per cent. As for the density of population across the globe, 57% of people
lives
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live
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in Asia, as opposed to Europe, America, and Africa, with approximately 10 to 15 per cent of
residens
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residents
for each of
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this part
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these parts
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of the
world
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. Another 5% accounts for the number of citizens in other regions.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words world with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution
  • expenditure
  • percentage
  • population density
  • global spending
  • basic human needs
  • wellbeing
  • priorities
  • correlate
  • comparison
  • economic development
  • investment
  • nutrition
  • survival needs
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