The bar graph and line chart illustrate the
number
of visitors from the US, UK and Japan who came to Australia and the kinds of vacations they enjoyed in 2005 and 2015.
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Overall
, it is evident that the majority of tourists came from the US and UK in the Linking Words
last
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year
, Use synonyms
while
more Japanese people visited in the first Linking Words
year
. Use synonyms
Whereas
, the Linking Words
number
of visitors Use synonyms
Correct pronoun usage
who enjoyed
enjoyed
backpacking holidays increased over time.
By observing the chart, it can be seen that in 2005, 800,000 residents from the United Kingdom travelled to Australia, which surged to 1,400,000 in 2015. Whilst, the Wrong verb form
enjoy
number
of travellers from the US was more than 400,000 in 2005, which significantly reached over 1,400,000 in the later Use synonyms
year
. Use synonyms
However
, the preference of Japanese people to visit Australia decreased in 2015 to 1,000,000 and 1,400,000 in 2005.
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Furthermore
, the Linking Words
number
of people Use synonyms
for
backpacking holidays was less than 500,000 in the initial Change preposition
on
year
, which gradually grew to more than 1,000,000 in 2015. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
number
of staying at Use synonyms
resort
was 1,600,000 in 2005, which Add an article
the resort
inclined
for the next five years and Verb problem
increased
then
declined to 1,000,000 in 2015.Linking Words
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