It is said that if most of the
people
in the country are wealthy, any increase in Use synonyms
economy
does not make the nationals happier. Add an article
the economy
However
, I am totally against the statement.
If the average level of wealth of the nationals is high, but there are extremely wealthy Linking Words
people
. The competition Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
for
the
job opportunities will become fiercer. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, in some developed countries Linking Words
such
as Korea, the top four powerful financial organizations own the most share of fortune in the whole society. To ensure their own profits, they only recruit Linking Words
the
students who graduated from high-ranking, expansive, or private Correct article usage
apply
university
, who the employers think are Fix the agreement mistake
universities
talents
and will bring more profits to their company. The poor, who cannot afford to take extra courses and have not performed well in the college entrance exam can only get the Replace the word
talented
low paid
work. They cannot afford the high expense of their children, which makes the social stratification more stable.
Add a hyphen
low-paid
Besides
, Linking Words
the
governments should spend more on public services and facilities to improve the Correct article usage
apply
overall
happiness of all human beings. Linking Words
The health
insurance in China Correct article usage
Health
guaranteed
that everyone can afford to go to Wrong verb form
guarantees
the
public hospital Correct article usage
a
whenever
they live in developed cities or less developed rural areas. Even Correct word choice
whether
the
patients with cancer are able to receive medical treatment. What is more, the development of urbanization leads to a convenient, modern and efficient life. Metro systems ensure Correct article usage
apply
people
commute efficiently Use synonyms
instead
of being stuck on busy roads. Commercial Linking Words
centers
provide Change the spelling
centres
people
Use synonyms
a
place to release stress where they can hang out with friends and chill out as well. Add the preposition
with a
Third,
public places like Linking Words
park
and playgrounds encourage Fix the agreement mistake
parks
the
seniors and children to do some physical exercises Correct article usage
apply
instead
of sitting at home for a day, with which a sense of belonging to the Linking Words
neighborhood
will be formed.
All in all, it is how the Change the spelling
neighbourhood
governments'
fiscal expenditure Change noun form
government's
that
can improve the happiness of all the nationals in the country. The officials should pay more attention to ensure the rights of the poor and meet the basic necessities Correct pronoun usage
apply
such
as public health, environment and education.Linking Words
chengdongshao