Your childhood friend has established his own business. He needs a partner whom he can completely trust and asks you to become his partner. Write a letter to him. In your letter: • Give the details about your knowledge in this particular field and your opinion; • Tell your decision and its reasons; • Thank him for trust and offer.

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Dear sharan, I hope you are doing very well. Thanks for giving me some time to think about your business offer ! Congratulations on Establishing your Own Security Agency which will help the city to reduce the number of crimes in the city . Your business would bring new hope to the people of our city to trust

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maintain peace in society . In

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way, you will be able to contribute to making a difference in people's lives .

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, I think the services your association provide are invaluable.

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, for the assignment offer, I would like to accept

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opportunity because I have the right knowledge to contribute to

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business . About my experience, I have been working for an association known as Garda World. I served the team under the role of Director since 2020 . Thanks for trusting me with

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position . I Promise to abide by the club's policies and values and ensure that achieve Milestones under your guidance . Yours Truly Dhruv

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coherence and cohesion

Consider organizing the letter into clear paragraphs, separating the introduction, body (with your opinions and experiences), and conclusion more distinctly.

task achievement

Make sure to directly address all three parts of the task in more detail; while you address them, elaborating further could increase clarity.

positive engagement

You have a warm greeting and thankful tone throughout the letter, which is very appropriate.

content clarity

You clearly convey your opinion about the business and your experience, which adds credibility to your decision.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

174 words

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