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The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The pie graph and diagram illustrate the
number
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 of research undergraduates from all universities in Australia, comparing the
years
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 2001 and 2010.
Overall
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, all types of
researchers
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 increased over the period in Australia , including the total
number
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. The
number
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 of international
researchers
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 grew,
however
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 , the local
students
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' proportion percentage declined after 9
years
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. In 2001, the total amount of undergraduate explorers was over 38,000 , and by 2010 the amount of Australian universities showed growth to 54,081 people. National research
students
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 rose by 6,000 people ,
while
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 foreign
researchers
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 approximately tripled in
number
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 over the nine
years
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. In the pie chart, the percentage of international
students
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 interested in research doubled and reached 27% , with proportions of female and male undergraduates of 15% and 12%. Over the
years
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 the non-local female
students
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 showed the most growth , in comparison to other sections
such
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 as foreign men and local
researchers
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, years, researchers, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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