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Writing Samples
Band 5

Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

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 modern
era
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 there are many small and large
companies
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 established. People prefer to
work
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 in small or big
company
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companies
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 based on their
interest
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interests
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 and experience. I would prefer to
work
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 in a
large scale
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 establishment because of globalization, in
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of
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for
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 my choice. In big
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organizations
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organization
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organization,
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 we can get
opportunity
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the opportunity
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 to
work
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 with
multi-cultural
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multicultural
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 people around the world. Our skills can be developed when we
work
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 with international teams. For those who want to
work
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abroad
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abroad,
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 the large organization will provide career development and onsite opportunity to
work
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 in abroad.
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, IT
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 like Cognizant recruit the freshers and provide them training
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 later they will send
right
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the right
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 candidate abroad to
work
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 with their onsite team. Another reason are corporate culture, better salary and benefits. Employees in
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multinational corporate
companies
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 provide competitive
salary
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salaries
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 and healthcare benefits.
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, they care about their employees
like
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by
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 providing them with
gym
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a gym
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, refreshment area, yoga classes and lunch free of cost.
Due to
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this
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 programme
productivity
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the productivity
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 of the employees will be increased.
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, some people prefer to
work
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 in small
companies
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 because they have lots of
opportunity
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opportunities
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 to improve their skills rapidly. Some even argue that their
work
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-life balance is better when they
work
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 in small
companies
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. Same time their hard
work
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 is easily noticed by the owner and rewards are given on time. In conclusion, small
companies
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 have some advantages I strongly believe that in
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apply
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globalization we should prefer to
work
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 in large
organization
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organizations
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 to
get
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achieve
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 career growth.

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to provide a clear introduction that outlines your main points more explicitly. This will help guide the reader through your arguments.
coherence and cohesion
When mentioning reasons, provide smoother transitions between sentences and ideas to enhance flow.
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Include specific examples and personal experiences to strengthen your arguments and show clear links between your ideas.
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In the conclusion, reiterate the main points clearly to reinforce your choice and ensure it ties back to your introduction.
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You have a clear preference for working in large companies and provide relevant reasons to support your choice.
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You mentioned specific benefits associated with large organizations, such as cultural diversity and employee care, which adds depth to your essay.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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